7 hints for Prewriting Exercises.

 The following is shamelessly ‘borrowed’ from a recent issue of Writer’s Digest magazine and ‘re-bestowed’ to you.

‘Prewriting. Freewriting. Mind Mapping. Clustering. If you’ve taken a creative writing or English composition class, you’ve likely encountered these terms. They represent an important step in the writing process and, in my view, the easiest and most fun. The gist of prewriting is to let ideas flow directly from your brain to the page, before they can be edited into submission.

Prewriting Techniques to Jump-Start Creativity

Whether you opt for the tried-and-true “wheel” approach (with subcategories radiating like spokes from your central theme), or a linear, list-based approach, the goal of all prewriting exercises is the same: freeing your subconscious mind to generate ideas, with a focus on quantity versus quality.

You have nothing to lose and nothing to prove, so enjoy this opportunity to celebrate your creative genius. Later in the writing process, as you grow attached to your “darlings,” you may find it more difficult to indulge your imagination.’

‘Try these prewriting techniques from Write-a-Thon by Rochelle Melander:

7 Prewriting Exercises to Launch the Writing Process:

  1. Mind Mapping. The mind map helps you record all of your ideas for a particular piece or scene. Use a sketchbook or piece of typing paper. You can use a regular pen or pencil, or colored markers and pencils.
  2. Brainstorming. Use this tool when you need to generate ideas. Write a list of everything you think might be helpful for writing about this topic or scene. Write as fast as you can and in no particular order. Don’t edit yourself. You may not understand what an idea has to do with your book, but your brain has an idea. Set your brain free to dream.
  3. Freewriting. When you need to release ideas from your subconscious mind, the free write can be a helpful tool. Set a timer for twenty minutes and write as fast as you can about your ideas for the piece you are writing. Don’t analyze or judge anything you write. Don’t think about this writing in connection with the finished piece, just write.
  4. Directed Questions. This tool helps you get clear about your ideas for the chapter or piece of writing. It can also help you narrow your focus. Interview yourself about the ideas you are working on. For a nonfiction chapter or article, ask and answer questions such as:
  • What is my main point?
  • What do I really want to say?
  • What effect do I want to have on my readers?
  • What points do I need to include to make this clear?

If you are working on a fiction scene or chapter, ask questions like:

  • What does each character want?
  • What does each character feel?
  • How does the action convey the desires and emotions of each character?
  • What mood am I creating in this scene?
  • What needs to happen in this scene to move the story forward?
  • What elements of setting contribute to the scene?
  1. Playing Journalist. If you are stuck about where to start a piece, it can be helpful to list the basic facts that any journalist would start with in a piece. Who? What? When? Where? Why? How? Then ask yourself, what’s the most interesting angle?
  2. Mapping It. If you are writing a novel or a memoir, it can be helpful to create a visual map of each location you are writing about. If you are writing a memoir, when you create the map of a house and the landmarks nearby, you will remember stories you can use in your work. Either way, keep the map near you when you write so you can refer to it.
  3. Talking it out. I’ve noticed that my writing-coaching clients who are speakers and teachers get their best ideas when they have an audience. If this is you, think about talking through your ideas with a friend or a small group of colleagues. Record the conversation and transcribe your words of wisdom as a first step toward gathering your ideas together for a book.’

These are all great ideas and worth trying in my opinion. But I must admit that this is a process I have only used when being pushed to produce something from scratch; no previous thoughts at all. Suitable for writing classes or workshops. I would love to hear opinions and experiences on this topic. (space below)  Elaine.

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Reading for Writing

Reading for Writing.

Any worthwhile book on writing will include the advice to read widely. Whether consciously reading the masters of the art to study their style or by casually absorbing the experience of being in another place in another’s shoes through the characters in a novel there is much to be learnt.

A recent article by Sydney Morning Herald columnist Richard Glover rejects the constantly recurring argument that Shakespeare could not have written the works attributed to him because he was the son of a tradesman and had never travelled outside Britain. Glover points out that Shakespeare was well educated and well read. He argues that it is not necessary to travel to a country before you can write about it – reading about it is sufficient.

His comments were instigated by the release of the film Anonymous, a film which sets out to prove that it was not Shakespeare who wrote the plays attributed to him but the Earl of Oxford. Glover asserts that it is ‘a film about the written word that seems unaware of the liberating and transforming powers of the written word.’*

‘Fred East – June 1924  writes:

‘You yearn to turn out a book-length your typewriter is silently shrieking abuse, you are itching to go. First read! Read the work of top-notch writers in your field. They know how! Read first for entertainment, then re-read for analysis. Soak yourself in their stuff – for atmosphere, colour, technique.’  **

Anyone who loves writing and wants to improve their abilities in producing work of a high standard will enjoy reading advice from accomplished writers. There is plenty of it about. Online, in newspaper reviews of new books, magazines and books on writing, all of them with interesting viewpoints and problem solving advice. Some matters become a source of constant argument and disagreement.

There is one point of agreement that seems to be accepted without reservation; the need to keep the promises made to yourself to write at a set time. In effect you are making an appointment with your subconscious. This is particularly important when writing fiction but applies equally to non-fiction writing if you would avoid writer’s block according to several writers of note.

Stephen King, in his book ‘On Writing’ makes the point strongly, as does Norman Mailer –‘The Spooky Art – Some Thoughts on Writing.’

Mailer sums it up this way:

‘Over the years, I’ve found one rule. It’s the only one I give when I talk about writing. A simple rule. If you tell yourself you are going to be at your desk tomorrow, you are by that declaration asking your subconscious to prepare the material. You are, in effect, contracting to pick up such valuables at a given time. Count on me, you are saying, to a few forces below, I will be there to write.’

* Richard Glover ‘Book your passage to travel the world without leaving home.’  SMH December 3-4 SPECTRUM.

**Quoted in Writer’s Digest, Jan 2012-02-28

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Writing ; where do the ideas come from?

Writing after all is building with ideas. This week I have been reading or re-reading authors comments on this very topic. Collecting ideas  – avoiding running out of ideas – putting ourselves in situations where ideas can flow. Here’s a sample:-

Filling the well

I learned never to empty the well of my writing, but always to stop when there was still something there in the deep part of the well, and let it refill at night from the springs that fed it.

- Ernest Hemingway

Along with Ernest Hemmingway other writers speak about filling the well. Notably Julia Cameron in her book “The Right to Write”

Cameron recommends  taking an “artist’s date” with ourselves. Choose somewhere stimulating from which ideas can spring.

Because I live in the Blue Mountains I have easy access to stunning views and the international tourists who provide some interesting people watching. Occasionally I also visit events such as the recent Picasso exhibition at the NSW Art Gallery. At the same time there was the Dobell drawing competition exhibition and in the basement a filmed interview with the great science fiction writer K.P.Dick. Great value for one day.

The latest Newswrite Magazine ( NSW Writers’ Centre ) carried an artcle by John Safran, a writer of note for TV  and comedy.

“…churn out ideas. Lots of them. Stop being in love with that one idea you have.”

“I worked at an ad agency as a copywriter before I got into TV. The creative director would make us draw up 30 squares on a page.  Every square had to be filled with an idea before he’d let us pitch to him.  When you’re forced at gunpoint to generate ideas that’s when you come up with the Sgt. Peppers of the Sea World ads….”

John Safran

So if we only have that one idea running in our heads it seems we need to work at drumming up many many more.

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Reading for writing

Reading about writing always gives me a boost. Not that I always take the advice to heart or use it in a practical way. But I think that maybe that’s okay too. All of us work differently and what is excellent advice for one can become an irritating impediment for another.

Reading ‘Glimmertrain’ essays by writers for writers doesn’t always result in changing my writing methods  but often I find books or essays that become my favourites. Sometimes these new recommendations intrigue me and although I don’t always buy the books the discussion about them may cause me to try some different techniques.  Certainly not all recommended books tempt me to buy them. Just as well for my budget, but there is still some different thought or way of reasoning that is left over in my head. (It’s always useful to have something in one’s head)

Organisation is a stumbling block for me. Making detailed outlines and following chapter plans diligently is, for me anyway, the surest way to deaden my enthusiasm and put an end to a writing project. I plough through until the momentum is taken over by the characters and events and this is so even when writing from life experience. The characters have to take on a life whatever the circumstances.

For me it is like trying to light a camp fire tediously with a stick and crumpled paper. Awful at the beginning and very uncertain but exciting and energising when it all takes off on its own.

Just the same I do get a lot of stimulus from reading about the methods of others . So I look for recommended books and enjoy reading them.

In one of the latest ‘Glimmertrain’ essays David Goguen recommends ‘Mystery and Manners’ by Flannery O’Connor.

Read more:

http://www.glimmertrain.com/b61goguen.html

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Gender Apartheid

World wide 191 million women work in the least desirable occupations in foreign countries. this often means that families are separated with children left behind in their home country and mothers often take care of strangers’ children while their own become victims of scattered families.

In a time when the rights of women are under scrutiny the worst of patriachal cicumstances are becoming established with the increased injustice of anarchic attitudes of backward customs being added to the inequality women suffer in their own country.

Read more from The Ithican

http://theithacan.org/20733

 

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Shanghai Sends Migrant Workers Home For Free.

Recently China has recognised the value of its migrant workers. These are workers who come from regional provinces and are crucial to keeping industry supplied with employees to keep industry progressing.There has not been a good record of treating these workers humanely, however. There is often no provision for education for the children of migrant workers and other benefits normally accorded to local citizens , such as medical benefits and satisfactory living conditions.  This is starting to change but not because of a newly found compassion or sense of justice. The cause of the change of heart is the realisation by the chinese authorities that, with an increasing number of middle class Chinese who are unwilling to do these unskilled jobs, workers from the rural provinces are crucial for the Chinese economy.As heart warming as the following article may seem ( Free buses made available so that migrant workers can go home for Spring Festival) we need to remember quite recent newspaper reports and photographs about toddlers being tied up to a pole while their parents work because of not having child care provided.
Shanghai Sends Migrant Workers Home For   Free

Xinhua Press article

Shanghai supplied 700 migrant workers with free bus     trips to their hometowns on Sunday after many workers were not able to     secure train tickets themselves, reports Xinhua. Millions of Chinese have     been struggling to book and buy tickets to get home for family reunions before Spring Festival.14 buses were arranged, heading for major cities of four     provinces including Anhui, in east China; Hubei and Henan, in central     China; and Sichuan in southwest China.Each person was also provided with food, a New Year     calendar and festival decorations.”We want to show respect and love to migrant     workers in this special way. They are an indispensable part of the     city,” said Tang Hua, vice CEO of Shanghai Yongda Group, one of the     major sponsors of the activity.”I couldn’t believe it in the beginning,” said     Zhang Qi, a migrant from Hubei.”With my parents and 5-year-old son in my hometown,     you could never know what it means to me to go home once a year. I miss     them so much,” said Zhou Mingxiang, a clerk at a Shanghai air     compressor company. “We all love Shanghai. The city is clean, safe and     civilized,” he added.

Fan Ping, who works as a driver, said that he works in     Shanghai not only for money to support his family, but also he can acquire     more skills. “The system of social security and welfare in Shanghai     has also been improving.”

Li Zhaohong, one of the drivers taking migrant workers     home told reporters that he and others actively chose to be a part of this     project. “We feel it is friendly to do something for the migrant     workers.”

“Take care on the way home,” said Jiao Yang,     deputy head of Shanghai Information Department. The short sentence won     thunderous applause.

 

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Writers – Can you see yourself in this?

From the list of comments from writers given in the previ0us blog two of them stand out for me. In the first one -by David Malouf- I identify my own rather vague, never satisfied with the quick answer personality.

In the second byPatrick White-I like to think I’ve found the justification.

“Writers are people who never stop being puzzled, in the way that small children are, about what’s going on about them … children are growing up into a world where no-one really explains anything to them. They can only make sense of things by looking close and trying to work out what’s going on. And I think most people seem after a certain time to decide they know how it all works. Writers are people who, really till the end of their days, never know how it works. Everything is a puzzle to them.” - David Malouf

 “Childhood is the purest well of experience from which a writer can draw.” – Patrick White

Please send your comment on your own favourite quote or the one you can identify with most easily. It would be interesting to compare.  Elaine

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More borrowings – this time from writers.

I have stolen the following from the Varuna writers’ House blog. I love the funny and sometimes consoling advice from writers who know the difficulties.

Varuna Alumni Association: the craft, the writing life

Stick em up:  quotes for your pinboard

Writers’ quotes to inspire, console, make  sense of things.

WRITERS’ QUOTES

“         Successful writers are not the ones who write the best   sentences. They are the ones who keep writing. They are the ones who  discover  what is most important and strangest and most pleasurable in  themselves, and keep  believing in the value of their work, despite the  difficulties.”

- Bonnie Friedman

“The  structure of a play is always the story of how the birds came home to  roost.” – Arthur Miller

On  finishing a book:

“You don’t say, ‘I’ve done it!’ You come, with a kind  of  horrible desperation, to realise that this will do.” – Anthony Burgess

“My own  experience is that once a story has been written, one has to cross out  the beginning and the end. It is there that we authors do most of our  lying.”

- Anton  Chekhov

“A writer who  waits for ideal conditions under which to work will die without putting a  word on paper.”

-E.B.  White

“One must be drenched in words,  literally soaked in them, to have the right ones form themselves into the  proper patterns at the right moment.”

- Hart Crane

“Writing a novel is actually  searching for victims. As I write I keep looking for casualties. The  stories uncover the casualties.”

- John Irving, Writers  at Work, 1988

Tuesday, May 17th, 1932

What is the right attitude towards  criticism? What ought I to feel and say when Miss B. devotes an article  in Scrutiny to attacking me? She is young, Cambridge, ardent.  And she says I’m a very bad writer. Now I think the thing to do is to  note the pith of what is said – that I don’t think – then to use the  little kick of energy which opposition supplies to be more vigorously  oneself. It is perhaps true that my reputation will now decline. I shall  be laughed and pointed at. What should be my attitude – clearly Arnold  Bennett and Wells took the cricitism of their youngers the wrong way.  The right way is not to resent; not to be longsuffering and Christian  and submissive either…The most important thing is not to think very  much about oneself. To investigate candidly the charge; but not fussily,  not very anxiously. On no account to retaliate by going to the other  extreme – thinking too much. And now that thorn is out – perhaps too  easily.

- Virginia Woolf, A Writer’s  Diary

“On completing a book, for a while  you think, that must  surely be the greatest novel written ever. And a  surprisingly short time after  that, it’s just hideously embarrassing,  just hideously embarrassing, I can’t  tell you. People compare it to  having a child, and it’s very true. You have this long gestation, and  then it comes out and you  have a brief patch of postnatal depression,  and then it’s incredibly cute and  charming, and then suddenly, it’s a  great, drunken adolescent being sick in  front of you and it’s horrible.  Horrible!”

- Philip Hensher

“In my experience, the angel  does, almost always, come. If I keep faith. On some days, keeping faith   means simply staying there, when more than anything else  I want to  get out of that room. It sometimes  means going up without hope and  without energy and turning on my computer. And, at the end of two  or  three hours, and without hope and without energy, I find that I have  indeed written some sentences  that wouldn’t have been there if I hadn’t  gone up to write them. And – what is even more surprising -  these  sentences written without hope or energy often turn out to be just as  good as the ones I wrote with hope and energy.”

- Gail Godwin, “Rituals  and Readiness”,   in  National Book Awards: The Writing Life

“All good writing is swimming  underwater, holding  your breath.” -          F. Scott Fitzgerald, letter to his daughter  Frances.

“The great enemy of clear language is  insincerity. When there is a gap  between one’s real and one’s declared aims, one turns as  it were instinctively  to long words and exhausted idioms, like a cuttlefish  squirting out ink.”

- George Orwell

“People talk about writers’ egos. I  don’t know how any writer can have any ego left after a certain age.” – Amanda Lohrey

“Do what you love.  Know your  own bone; gnaw it, bury it, unearth it – and gnaw it still.” – Thoreau

“In the middle of the silence in a  writer’s house lies an invalid: the book being worked on.” - Richard Eder

“As the outside world grows less  dependable, I keep buttressing my inside world, where people go on  meaning well and surprising other people with little touches of grace.   There are days when I sink into my novel like a pool and emerge feeling  blank and bemused and used up.  Then I drift over to the schoolyard and  there’s this mother wondering if I’m doing anything halfway useful yet.   Am I working? Have I found a job?  No, I tell her.  I’m still just  writing.” – Anne Tyler

“Cultures cherish artists because they  are people who can say, Look at that. And it’s not Versailles. It’s a  brick wall with a ray of sunlight falling on it.” – Marilynne Robinson

“Writers of fiction are collectors of  useless information. They are the opposite of good, solid, wise citizens  who collect good information and put it to good use. Fiction writers  remember tiny little details, some of them almost malicious, but very  telling.” – William Trevor

“If a writer has to rob his mother, he  will not hesitate: the ‘Ode on a Grecian Urn’ is worth any number of  old ladies.” - William Faulkner

“When starting to think about any  novel, part of the motive is: I’m going to show them, this time. Without  that, a lot of what passes under the name of creative energy would be  lost.” - Kingsley Amis

“The novel tends to tell us  everything, whereas the short story tells us only one thing, and that  intensely.” - VS Pritchett

“One of the tricks is to maintain your  sense of awe at what  you’re experiencing … I think Andre Gide said,  ‘the only way to write about  Africa is to go there for 10 days or 10  years’. So , I’m one of those 10-day, big-eyed  guys. ” - Richard Price

INTERVIEWER: How do you realise you’re  on the wrong track? Alice Munro: I could be writing away one day and think I’ve  done very well; I’ve done more pages than I usually do. Then I get up  the next morning and realize I don’t want to work on it anymore. When I  have a terrible reluctance to go near it, when I would have to push  myself to continue, I generally know that something is badly wrong.  Often, in about three quarters of what I do, I reach a point somewhere,  fairly early on, when I think I’m going to abandon this story. I get  myself through a day or two of bad depression, grouching around. And I  think of something else I can write. It’s sort of like a love affair:  you’re getting out of all the disappointment and misery by going out  with some new man you don’t really like at all, but you haven’t noticed  that yet. Then, I will suddenly come up with something about the story  that I abandoned; I will see how to do it. But that only seems to happen  after I’ve said, No, this isn’t going to work, forget it. – Alice Munro

‘When a book leaves your hands, it  belongs to God. He may use it to save a few souls or to try a few  others, but I think that for the writer to worry is to take over God’s  business.’ – Flannery O’Connor

‘Technique alone is never enough.  You  have to have passion.  Technique alone   is just an embroidered  potholder.’ – Raymond Chandler

‘There’s no money in poetry, but then  there’s no poetry in money, either.’ – Robert Graves

“Over the years, I’ve found one rule  … If you tell yourself you are going to be at your desk tomorrow, you  are by that declaration asking your unconscious to prepare the material.  You are, in effect, contracting to pick up such valuables at a given  time. Count on me, you are saying to a few forces below: I will be there  to write. The point is that you have to maintain trustworthy  relations.” – Norman Mailer, The Spooky Art: Some Thoughts on Writing

“My last page is always latent in my first; but the intervening  windings of the way become clear only as I write.” – Edith Wharton, A Backward Glance, 1934.

“The virtues of understatement and  self-restraint make social intercourse civilised and agreeable, but they  have a paralysing effect on autobiography.  The memoir-writer ought  neither to spare himself nor hide his light under a bushel; he must  obviously overcome his reluctance to relate painful and humiliating  experiences, but he must also have the less obvious courage to include  those experiences which show him in a favourable light.” – Arthur Koestler, in his autobiography, Arrow in the Blue

“I like to write when I feel spiteful: it’s like having a  good sneeze.” – DH Lawrence, letter, 1913

“Writers don’t need tricks or    gimmicks or even necessarily need to be the smartest fellows on the  block. At   the risk of appearing foolish, a writer sometimes needs to  be able to just stand   and gape at this or that thing – a sunset or an  old shoe – in absolute and   simple amazement.” – Raymond Carver,  http://books.guardian.co.uk/authors/author/0,,-230,00.html

“One must avoid ambition in  order to write. Otherwise something else is the goal: some kind of  power beyond the power of language. And the power of language, it seems  to me, is the only kind of power a writer is entitled to.”

- Cynthia Ozick, The Writers’  Chapbook, 1989, George Plimpton ed

‘An author arrives at a good style when his language performs  what is required of it without shyness.’

- Cyril Connolly, in Enemies of  Promise, 1938

“Therefore, be brave. Everyone has  gone through the loss of faith in the material. Sometimes the novel dies  beneath you like a horse, and when it begins to really smell, bury it.  But not until it’s really putrid do you bury it.’ – Thomas Keneally in Writers on Writing, ed James  Roberts, Barry Mitchell, Roger Zubrinich, Penguin

“Don’t let’s pity ourselves. We are  the privileged. Our minds are lit by  gas. There are so many people  shivering in attics without even candles.” – Gustave Flaubert

“In writing novels I have never been able to place much  importance upon the distinction between real and imagined. A novelist  … makes as much or as little use of the real world as he needs to  project his vision of life.” – Angus Wilson

“I loved those novels so much that I was paralysed by them for a long  time. All those possibilities. All that perfectly reconciled style. It  made me afraid to put words down.” - Joan Didion, on the novels of Henry James

“The first page of every novel should be: ‘Trust me, this  will take time but there is order here, very faint, very human.’” -              Michael Ondaatje

“Writers are people who never stop  being puzzled, in the way  that small children are, about what’s going  on about them … children are  growing up into a world where no-one  really explains anything to them. They can  only make sense of  things  by looking  close and trying to work out what’s going on.   And I think  most people seem after a certain time to decide they know how it all  works. Writers are  people who, really till the end of their days, never know how it works. Everything is a puzzle to them.” -                David Malouf

“You get to the point where the divergence is as small as you can make  it,   accepting            that you will always have a bigger, brighter and darker novel  in mind   than what            you were able to get down on paper.” – Michael Cunningham

“Childhood is the purest well of experience from which a writer can  draw.” – Patrick White

“It does no harm to repeat as often as you can: ‘without me the  literary  industry would not exist. The publishers, the agents, the  sub-agents, the  accountants, the libel lawyers, the departments of  literature, the  professors, the theses, the books of criticism, the  reviewers, the book  pages – all this vast and proliferating edifice is  because of this small,  patronised, put-down and under-paid person.’” - Doris Lessing

“‘I sometimes ask myself whether I enjoy writing. The answer is yes,  but a  qualified            yes. I only enjoy it when it’s going well. Starting a new book  is  always hard work, and            work that moreover for months feels pointless (why  bother?  why not do something else?) or ill-directed (why this subject? why  not  something more global, more domestic, less domestic?): I walk            around,  looking for plot, structure, characters, images,  trying not to repeat or imitate or listen            too much to the wrong voices. This is a dreary time,  comfortless, irritable, unsatisfying. When the book begins to move,  everything changes, and everything I see or hear or read seems to be  part of, to contribute to the new pattern. This  is exciting. It’s the  only time when I forget time. Past the half way mark, a novel almost  writes itself. Events beget events, characters insist on  seeing  one  another again, and I just sit and transcribe. I get quite cheerful and  communicative. A strange process …’ – Margaret Drabble

“Everywhere I go I  am asked if the universities stifle writers. In my  opinion they don’t stifle enough of them.” – Flannery O’Connor

”It seems to me that since I’ve had children, I’ve grown  richer and deeper.   They may have slowed down my writing for awhile, but when I did  write, I had   more of a self to speak from. After all, who else in the world do you  have to   love, no matter what? My life seems more intricate. Also more dangerous.’ – Anne Tyler

”Writing criticism is to writing fiction and poetry as  hugging the shore is to sailing in the open sea.’ - John Updike

“Before publication, and if provided by persons whose judgment you  trust, yes, of course criticism helps. But after something is published, all I  want to read or hear is praise. Anything less is a bore, and I’ll give you fifty  dollars if you produced a writer who can honestly say he was ever helped by the prissy carpings  and condescensions of reviewers. I don’t mean to say that none of the  professional critics are worth paying attention to – but few of the good ones review on a regular  basis. Most of all, I believe in hardening yourself against opinion. I’ve had, and continue  to receive, my full share of abuse, some of it extremely personal, but it doesn’t faze me  any more. I can read the most outrageous libel about myself and never skip a  pulse-beat.’ – Truman Capote

“As a writer one has to take the chance on being a fool … yes, to be  a fool, that perhaps requires the greatest courage.’ – Anne Sexton

‘I’m not saying all publishers have to be literary, but some interest in books would help.’ – AN Wilson

‘I am constantly meeting ladies who say, ‘how lovely it must  be to write’, as though one sat down at the escritoire after breakfast, and  it poured out like a succession of bread and butter letters, instead of being dragged out, by  tongs, a bloody mess, in the small hours.’ - Patrick White

‘And here I sit, like a weevil in a biscuit.’ - Virginia Woolf

‘Being a writer makes one a ghost before one’s time. The kind  of ghost that likes a libation.’ – Sylvia Townsend Warner

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‘The good refugee’ and other borrowings

It’s holiday season for some of us so just some borrowed writings about attitudes towards people less fortunate than us. The past year has shown a deluge of misguided hatreds drummed up by people who don’t stop to think things out for themselves. The following borrowed jottings put it better than I can.

If I were a refugee

If I were a refugee

What a nice one I would be;

Not in need of gilding,

My traumas would be character building.

The wars that overturned my life;

Atrocities and endless strife

And persecutions hateful,

Would have taught me to be grateful.

I’d have no breaking point at all.

Lock me up against a wall

And I would wait

And smile and say “no worries mate”.

Leunig

 A Small Minded World

It’s a small world, especially if you have a small mind. When we focus only on the things we know about, we keep encountering people with similar interests. Their views reinforce our own. And our own attitudes narrow even further. Yet the more we are willing to learn, the more there is to discover.

Jonathan Cainer

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Foreign workers under threat of execution.

Indonesia is troubled by the threat to its citizens overseas of being given the death penalty for what are often minor offences and many by public beheading.

Because of the increasing incidence of this extreme penalty the Indonesian government is setting in motion legal intervention.

My question: Why is there so little interest in this issue in our local media in Australia? Certainly Australian citizens are rarely in a situation where they are working in these low-paid positions – as domestic workers or unskilled factory or construction jobs. Usually Australian expat workers are treated well; good salary and work conditions. But are we callous enough to just ignore the less fortunate?

Even in the best of jobs overseas there is a high level of stress with language difficulties and misunderstandings about the culture and the way that the systems work in other lands but to have the horror of extreme punishment for minor law infringements without adequate representation must be a nightmare.

I have mentioned previously the fact that many third world countries rely on the money brought into their countries by OFSWs (Overfseas Foreign Workers ) so it needs to go both ways. They need to protect their own people . Indonesia is doing something about it but it needs to be an international and consistent effort.

Currently these are the list of Indonesian nationals under threat of a death sentence.

“146 workers are under death sentence in Malaysia; 45 workers in Saudi Arabia; 15 workers in China; 2 workers in Singapore; 1 worker in Iran; and 1 worker in Brunei Darussalam.’

See the news item below.

VIVAnews – The National Commission on Violence against Women (Komnas Perempuan) has called for the government to announce the report on migrant worker issues especially those facing death sentence.

According to the Komnas Perempuan, until now the Migrant Worker Rescue Task Force has yet to show effective measures to save the lives of Indonesia’s migrant workers who are about to be executed.

“Based on the Foreign Ministry’s data, there are still 210 Indonesian workers who are facing death sentence,” Chief of Komnas Perempuan, Yuniyanti Chuzaifah, said in a press release, December 19.

Yuniyanti said 146 workers are under death sentence in Malaysia; 45 workers in Saudi Arabia; 15 workers in China; 2 workers in Singapore; 1 worker in Iran; and 1 worker in Brunei Darussalam.  See more…

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